I’m 11 years old and i need an opinion on a poem i made for my mom the poem goes like this mom you’d sell your heart for me so gentle and so very clean i think your heart may be made of gold but i wouldn’t know because it would be already sold
Its really good, just the ‘because it would be already sold’ part is a bit weird and would take a while to understand.
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Wednesday, November 11th, 2009 at 5:55 am
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November 11th, 2009 at 11:12 am
what is "it would already be sold" mean? the rest is good
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November 11th, 2009 at 11:57 am
Its really good, just the ‘because it would be already sold’ part is a bit weird and would take a while to understand.
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